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Thursday, August 30, 2018

My ice palace writing

This week my class has been reading a book called Ice palace.
So first we had to write two paragraphs of our opinion about what Ivans life was like. So say we read some of the books. Then we have to write our own two paragraphs then we read the book again and see if we have written it similar to the real ice palace book.

Here's mine what do you think of my ice palace story do you think it is good, do you think that I have done enough on my ice palace writing. do you think I need to add better comment I hope you liked it.

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