This week we have been working on another Inquiry called our inquiry booklet. This activity not been finished yet but some of it we have done. This activity is quite fun but we still have quite a lot more to do before the end. this is probably our best inquiry so far I am really enjoying this Inquiry and I bet it is even going to probably get better here are the main parts of my booklet I hope you think it is going bye.
My topic is about the O-zone and how it helps New Zealand.
Kia ora Aliz'e!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Miss Birtch and I am a Year 8 teacher from Hornby High School. I enjoyed taking a look at your Inquiry work. I think you came up with some interesting questions about the O-Zone layer.
To help support your work and make it even better, a helpful tip would be to watch where your capital letters and full stops are. In your introduction, there were a few sentences that were missing punctuation. Remember, after a full stop you must start with a capital!
I look forward to reading more blog post about your inquiry topic!
- Miss Birtch
Year 8 Teacher
Hornby High School
HI miss birch Im sorry this slide does not have a lot on it because when I posted it we had only just started with our sub questions but anyway thank you for commenting on my blog post by.
ReplyDelete