Wednesday, May 24, 2017
Alize's Narrative
Slowly, the mammoth foot moved, then the trunk, then a loud growl shook the..ground the environment shook the mountain shaked and the ice slowly cracked and then the man started running and the mammoth started moving again and boom! The mammoth got out and it started running until the mammoth stepped on the man straight away. So all you left was a dead man. Finally the mammoth was gone nothing was left no mammoth only half of a man. the end.
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Aliz'e, I was very impressed by your narrative writing this week. Well done for also sharing your learning on your learning blog. You are beginning to add a personal voice to your writing and to your blog. Well done!
ReplyDeleteLove your choice in words Alizé!
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